Some people devote their lives to discovery. These people are very adventurous and take chances. I myself am a very adventurous person. I love white water rafting, roller coasters, and i love taking risks. Taking risks is what makes life fun.
Many people in history have devoted their life to discovery. For example, Lewis and clark were sent by Thomas Jefferson to find a water route across North America and explore the west. They met Sacagawea on their way. They were very devoted to exploring the west.
I think the reason some people devote their life to discovery is because it involves taking risks and being adventurous. Taking risks involves danger, but it also involves fun, and that is what life is about. And that is what i think about adventurous people and taking risks.
Sam, great job. I think it is obvious that you like adventure! I went whitewater rafting once, and I loved it!
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